For my paper I had big concerns about my intro and conclusion which I am planning on fixing before passing in. For the most part my peers said that I could add details and expand on. Throughout the whole paper I mostly used Gee as the almost “villain” between him and Jordan/Delpit. My peers didn’t find any huge issues with my use of Jordan or Gee, but I think specifically I need to work on blending some of the sentences and paragraphs better. I think with the addition of a proper conclusion and tweaking of my intro will help the reader understand more what my perspective is.