Top Left: The first annotation is about how much a teacher/ sponsor can effect you life, and in that case in a negative way. The second talks about how the author the narrative shifted from victim to rebel.

Top Middle: First annotation labels the students sponsor. Second annotation talks about positive reinforcement that made Sam realize the benefit of literacy.

Top Right: The first annotation explains how perfectly she states why writing is important. The second says how the self confidence leans towards a hero narrative.

Bottom: The first annotation how his sponsor used a small mistake in order to change his life. The second annotation says how his sponsor saw his potential and forced him to see it.