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- Throughout my paper I add and at points challenge the ideas of Alexander, Brandt, and Williams. I think my peers agreed that my argument seems to add but challenge the ideas in order to center my paper on my main claim. In the specific narratives I chose I used all the information I could to benefit my claims, and didn’t leave much information out.
- My peers made comments that informed me that I needed more introduction for our scholarly articles, specifically Alexander’s and Brandt’s in the very beginning. With the literacy narratives I gave enough intro of their authors and the names. In this area I need to add further introductions and descriptions of the scholarly articles we use.
- In this section I need to do more research into certain parts of Alexander and Brandt to further help support my claim and ideas throughout, but for the most part my evidence is settled.
