After working hard on the rough draft for this project I still was mostly expecting to have to make many revisions to make it perfect. When I received the draft back I was pleasantly surprised to find that I had done pretty well on almost every section, with a few things to tweak here and there. The challenging part was the justification portion, which I actually had little trouble writing originally and actually thought I did well. Upon looking over the section my professor made it clear that I needed more. I needed UNE’s mission statement and core values, as well as how it would affect the sustainability ratings that the school received. With these additions, and tweaks throughout I believe that the project proposal is in much better standings than it was before.